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HOWEVER IF THIS BOOK REACHES THE REACH I EXPECT THEN I'LL SURELY POST MORE CHAPTERS. AND THIS BOOK WILL RELEASE AFTER 10TH MARCH. I'LL POST THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS JUST TO DETERMINE IF THERE IS ENOUGH AUDIENCE WHO'LL BE WILLING TO READ THIS NOVEL.
A Goodbye in October
They say love is supposed to make you feel safe, like a promise that everything will fall into place. But what happens when it doesn't? What happens when the love you thought would save you only leaves you with more questions than answers?
Akaash and Naina — two teenagers, two different worlds, one tangled love. It started like any story does — with a glance, a spark, a connection that felt like destiny. He was the quiet boy at the border, always watching, always calculating, while she was the day-scholar, free-spirited, trusting.
They were different. Opposites, maybe. But together, they made sense. At least, it seemed that way in the beginning.
They weren't just another couple. They were the couple. The one everyone envied. Or, at least, that's how it seemed.
But something about their relationship felt... off.
How long could it last? How long could a love that seemed too perfect, too intense, hold up under the weight of jealousy, secrets, and lies?
People around them started noticing. The whispers started, at first soft, then growing louder. Friends became strangers. Even the ones who were closest to Naina turned their backs on her, as though her happiness was something they couldn't bear. But why? Was it the way Akaash looked at her? Or was it something else?
For Naina, it was all too much. The love, the jealousy, the drama that she couldn't escape. She didn't see it at first, but everything around them—everything they had—was crumbling. Slowly, but surely.
Akaash never seemed to notice, or if he did, he never said a word. He had a way of making everything look so simple. Everything was always under control... at least, that's how he made it seem.
But nothing is as perfect as it seems.
The cracks in their relationship weren't visible to the world. But Naina could feel them. The silence between them when they used to talk for hours, the distance growing despite the promises. She thought she was just being paranoid—maybe it was just the pressure of it all. But then again, how long could it go on before something broke?
And then, October came.
The month that changed everything. The month that turned a love story into a memory. But whose fault was it? Was it hers, for trusting too much? Or was it him, the boy who seemed perfect but hid so much beneath the surface?
Everyone thought they knew what happened. Everyone thought they understood why things fell apart. But no one saw the whole story. No one knew the games, the manipulation, the quiet betrayals that no one spoke about.
In the end, October wasn't just about a goodbye. It was the beginning of something neither of them could fix. And maybe, just maybe, the goodbye wasn't even hers to give.
A Goodbye in October isn't just a story about two people falling in love. It's about the secrets we hide, the lies we tell, and the jealousy we can't control.
But sometimes, the hardest part isn't saying goodbye — it's realizing you were never really seen at all.
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